1. Three lines with 17 syllables in the pattern of 5 syllables, 7 syllables, 5 syllables
2. Only one topic
3. Traditionally about nature and/or seasons
4. Does not rhyme
5. Written in present tense
6. Stirs the imagination
Sunshine by J. McGuire
Breaking through treetops
filtering golden beauty
bringing in the day
Spring By Alina S.
Spring is here today
Daffodils and crocuses
Blooming everywhere
Daffodils and crocuses
Blooming everywhere
When it Rains by Josh P.
Clouds roaring with fierce
Lightening attacks with anger
Peaceful when rain stops
Spring Flowers by Connor H.
They are violet blue
they are purple and yellow
they are spring flowers
they are purple and yellow
they are spring flowers
Mushrooms by Sean C.
walking through the woods
see those mushrooms, see them.
go and pick them please
see those mushrooms, see them.
go and pick them please
Wildfire by Shelby C.
Bright like a wild fire
suddenly stepping forward,
out of plane nothing.
Jumping Flowers by Justin H.
Flowers jumping up
out of the rich dark brown soil
their bright pedals glow
out of the rich dark brown soil
their bright pedals glow
Hot, Nice Day by Dimitri H.
Walking outside, oooh
look at the big sunflower
what a hot nice day
look at the big sunflower
what a hot nice day
Morels by Mrs. Bower
Hunting for mushrooms
Delicacies hiding low
cool, damp, sunny day.
Delicacies hiding low
cool, damp, sunny day.
Carpenter Bees by Mrs. Bower
Angry, droning pests
Aggressively drilling holes
wood chewing insect.
An Arch of Color by Jennie B.
Rainbows have colors
Pot O' Gold at the bottom
An arch of color
Pot O' Gold at the bottom
An arch of color
Walking in the Woods by Brittany M.
Walking in the woods
alone looking for a waterfall
it's close when it's cool.
Dancing Rain by Haley E.
Rain dancing outside
Around and around it goes
Going on forever
Around and around it goes
Going on forever
Wolves by Kari W.
Mistaken creatures
Wandering through the forest
Gentle animals.
Wandering through the forest
Gentle animals.
Grass by Amanda K.
long, soft cut, pokey
green, soft, rough, up in the air
falling all over
Clouds by Dillon Y.
Clouds, drifting like ghost
in the sky so high above
Fly by day and night.
in the sky so high above
Fly by day and night.
Birds by Brianna G.
birds fly in the air
cardinals and red tailed hawks
what beautiful birds.
The trees of the damp
forest move swiftly by my
eyes with great beauty.
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14 comments:
Great job every one.This is really good.
Good haiku's guys and girls but mostly guys just kidding. I could not think when I made mine. There pretty tough I'm glad I pulled through!!!!!!!!!
I think everyone did a good job on the haikus!
If you liked my poem wild fire than read these 2 poems.
Rainfall
rain will fall on me
although wet I play today
when will rainfall come
forgotten
she was always there
has she been noticed at all
she been forgotten
I think that every person can do a Haiku poem. They are really really easy. The only thing is you have to try,
I like all the haiku poems. You guys did a great job. I thought they were easy except that i kept using the same word over and over again.
I thought it was fun because it was a challenge to write a Haiku. It was hard because you had to write Haiku and follow
all the rules.
The Haiku today were nice but I couldn't make one because I felt like was going to throw up.
Great job everybody. I think it is neat to see these great haiku poems. It was a fun challenge to write haiku.
I didn't miss school on Saturday because I was a slacker and just didn't want to go to school on a Saturday. I went to school the first time we had Saturday school. I was sick AGAIN on Saturday. xP
I like to write hiatus and poems can we do that more often after the big test?!=D
I didn't no what i was doing at first but now i think im getting batter at the Haiku
Wow there are some really good ones in there. Ha ha good thing I didn't have to do it! =D Anyway some of those doesn't even seem like the people I no like Dimitri I liked yours In all but it just doesn't seem like you wrote it I'm not saying you stole it out of a poem book cause you didn't well lets hope not.
Also like conner yours doesn't seem like you wrote it but still i liked SOME of them. My favorite of all not to say that the rest are bad cause there not but I would have to say Josh p. and his poem WHEN IT RAINS congrats Josh I really liked it alot! pEACe OuT !
I though that righting this would be easy but I was wrong.
Mr.McGuire I got a haiku.
Spring begins shyly
with a few bladesof green grass
growing in a feild
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