Thursday, December 1, 2011

Want to Put a Little Ryhme in Your Life?


We are working with poetry in Reading Workshop.  We have focused on free verse poems, and a few concrete poems, but sometimes it is fun to write a rhyming poem.  A great tool for this is at Rhymezone.

Pick a topic and see what you can do.  Write something that makes the reader laugh, or cry, or both.

I knew from the first day,
these students were weird.
But partway through the year,
It's worse than I feared

I tried to help them,
they definitely needed steered
But partway through the year,
It was worse than it appeared.

I wasn't sure what to do,
Their brains had been cleared.
And partway through the year,
No senses had reappeared.

I gave them good advise,
because I knew they needed steered.
But partway through the year,
their brains were still smeared.

It could be the teacher,
at first I feared.
But partway through the year,
His efforts should be cheered!

Have a nice day students!   You don't like my poem?  Well show me what you can do!

2 comments:

emily drummond said...

Dear mr mcuguire I miss you alot and I hope the kids you have this year are not your fav. I hope us from last year still are



Your old student,
Emily Drummond

Mr. McGuire said...

Emily, I can't believe you even had to ask--of course your class is one of my all time favorites! Thanks for stopping by to comment.