When someone reads a post you wrote, do they know it's you? Having a writer's voice and a style of your own comes from writing, writing some more, and writing some more. Eventually, your writing will take on a style of its own.
Authors with several books published are usually easy to recognize by their style. Gary Paulsen with his wordy, descriptive, "I have been there and done it" style is consistent in his books. John Scieszka with his choppy sentences, constant dialogue, and wacky events amuses his readers.
Blogging cured me of my writing blahs. It provided me with an outlet that fits me like a glove, helped me discover my writing voice, and made me realize that I LOVE to write - indeed, maybe LIVE to write.
What about you, student bloggers? Are you beginning to write in a consistent style? Can your readers recognize you by your tone? Or by the way you discuss topics? By the end of a year of blogging, will you have found your style?
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As we start a new year in Reading Workshop, one of the main goals is making writing meaningful using descriptive writing with many supporting details. It really does not matter whether the writing is a response to a question, a blog post, a journal, a letter, or any other type of writing. Quality writing brings the reader into the mind and the heart of the writer. Details help the reader see, and feel, and understand.
When I read Katey's blog post, it grabbed me and I knew immediately, this was a great example of what I expect in students' writing. This was in response to a prompt from Larger-Than-Life Lara.
My first impression of Lara was "Whoa, what in the world is she describing?" I actually didn’t know what to say about Lara, it was just like an "OMG!" moment, I was speechless. I don’t know if that was what the author wanted people to think, but that was my thought (sorry if that makes anybody mad). When Lara was first described by Laney I thought she wouldn’t be like she is. I didn’t think that Lara would be always smiling and cheerful. I was also suprised after Laney descibed her, that she was a new student. At first I thought she was an adult, but when she said that she was a new student I was shocked.
I read Cassie's blog yesterday, and thought about it several times throughout the evening. I woke up this morning and thought about it again. She really nailed it. She compared the meanness in Larger-Than-Life Lara with what she sees and feels some times at school.
As we work towards improving higher level thinking, and writing that supports ideas and opinions with explicit and intricate details, she wrote a post that was extraordinary. However, there were many mistakes in PUGS (Punctuation, Usage, Grammar, and Spelling). Her post shows how blogging will build writing skills, while pushing students to think, and reason, and consider themselves, their lives, and how people treat others.
Opinions are sometimes really mean like when someone talks about you. When you talk about them and it is not nice but it could be nice sometimes. When people do that it is just like them talking about you. How would you feel if someone talked about you? It would not feel to good.
That is why I don’t like it when my friends make fun of people to make them look cool. It just makes them look like a jerk. I don’t like it when people talk about people. It is just really mean. I really think that if we don’t talk about people there would be no fights at school and for people who do talk about people need to stop.
Don’t talk about people because when people do it just gets back at them and they talk about kids. People don’t like it when you talk about them because all it does is start a fight. So thats why I don’t but I’m not going to lie. I have talked about people but I quit.
One of the challenges of having students write all of their assignments on a blog is coming up with a fair and objective way of grading. Writing assignments in Reading Workshop are graded with a rubric that looks at several factors to come up with an overall grade.
After considering several rubrics, I created the Stair Steps to Success. As students' writing improves and posts get better and better, they can climb the stairs to writing success.
These questions can help certain determine their grade.
Did you spell everything correctly? I would hope so. After all, who would want to write something that is available to the whole world, and misspell words? Can the reader understand the topic because you stick to it? Following these minimal standards will earn you at least a D.
Did you use correct grammar? Did you take time to check your PUGS? Can the reader follow your post in an organized manner? This is still a most basic expectations for writers that want to publish their work. The skills learned in the primary grades are not too much to expect for work posted on the Internet. A C means satisfactory and not meeting this basic criteria would surely not deserve anything higher.
Do you have interesting content presented in a well-written way? To build loyal readers, you must grab the reader. Supporting details draw in the readers and give them understanding. If posts are written cleanly with correct PUGS, the words illustrate the meaning, and the reader can visualize your ideas, you will earn a B.
Does your writing cause the reader to pause, and think, or cause the reader to agree or disagree? Sometimes hours after reading an essay, the reader is still thinking about it. When a blog post has that something special, then the writer deserves an A. To earn this, the majority of posts must be of exceptional quality.
What step are you on? Have you climbed the stairs to writing success?
Everyone that blogs wants readers. And, we wish that every single person that visited our blog would comment. In fact, almost any comment is better than none. So, the most important rule for blog comments is to comment. If you agree, say so. If you disagree, or have a different opinion, say so. But whatever you do, take a minute and let us know you were here.
As students in Reading Workshop begin to build their blogs, post by post, the need for some structure in commenting is evident. Hopefully these guidelines will help students engage in meaningful dialogue, comment by comment.
1. Be nice. No name-calling and personal abuse, please.
2. Keep on topic. Don't write a comment that has little or nothing to do with the subject of the article.
3. Opposing opinions are welcome, as long as they are respectful of the views of others. If you disagree with the opinions of the author, express it politely.
4. Don’t issue personal attacks or insults. Attacks against the author, other bloggers, commenters or people will be deleted.
5. Avoid repeating yourself. If many people have already said something, please don’t say it again. Once you make a point, support it, but don't keep saying the same thing over, and over, and over.
5. Avoid repeating yourself. If many people have already said something, please don’t say it again (See how annoying this is).
6. Don’t make comments like “Great post.” If you read it, say why it was great. Add something to the conversation. Add your own view, or thoughts to the topic.
7. Don’t use incorrect grammar or mispellings. Doing this makes the blog look like a low quality blog. It makes the blogger feel like you don't care enough to take the time to do it right.
Mrs. Scott, the principal stopped by the room as she so often does, just to see how things were going. Up came Chomper Sue, the gum chewingest kid to hit the class in many a year. Mrs. Scott told her to spit out the gum. Boy, did Sue just make her teacher happy.
To this point in the year, Sue had been doing fairly well--much better than last year. It's a shame she couldn't see that she was well on her way to wrecking her great start. In less than a half hour, she was chomping away again, slapping her gums together and cracking her bubble gum. That made two write-ups in one class.
After lunch, Sue came up the stairs for her afternoon class, mouth wide open, chomping on more gum. What a day--three writeups for the same offense. This earned her some time on the wall during recess the next day. Sticking to her pattern of self-destruction, Sue did not stand on the wall today, so this earned her two more days.
In less than two days, Sue aggravated her favorite teacher over and over. She showed disrespect chewing gum, which is so trivial, but then she just kept flaunting her disregard for school rules.
In the process of all of this mess, Sue who thinks of herself as an independent young woman, gave up all control of herself at school. She became a discipline problem, disrepecting teachers and ignoring rules. In the process, the teachers are forced to deal with Sue's behavior, and deal with the aggravation of a student that can not do the most simple things to be successful.
I wonder if Chomper Sue knows all she lost over three sticks of gum?
Her homework paper said she read exactly 30 minutes a day. She read exactly 10 pages each time. As I looked at the paper, I thought, "another fake reader. Why?"
The Read at Home assignment is meant to be low stress. All students have to do to get a good grade is read. And the more they read, the better the grade. And they can read any book they want. But still she chose to fake read.
I know grades do not matter that much to her. So why did she lie about her reading? I had already been watching her in class and could see that she does not like reading and has no interest in her book.
I wonder if she is a Will Smith fan? I wonder if she will believe him when he says she can succeed? I wonder if she has the guts to want to be something and the strength to chase it?
The student's task for the day was to pick one area that Will Smith discusses in the video and write a post in their blog. They could rewatch that piece of the video. The times are listed in parenthesis after the area.
It Can Be That Easy (1:00)
There's No Shortcut to Success (1:38)
Lay One Brick at a Time (3:00)
Focus on Making a Difference (3:48)
Represent an Idea/Possibilities/You Can Make What You Want (4:35)
You Have to Believe (5:00)
Nothing is Unrealistic (5:45)
Our Thoughts are Physical/Make a Choice (6:47)
You Really Have to Focus (8:08)
Attack Your Fears/"I Hate Being Afraid of Anything" (8:30)
Protect Your Dream (9:17)
You can check out their thoughts, ideas, and opinions by following the links to Student Blogs in the sidebar.
As the Reading Workshop students begin to blog regularly (see links in the sidebar), one might question, what do you want the students to get out of this project? How will it help them? Are the benefits academic and or social? Listed below are the goals and benefits of student blogs.
Goals with student blogs include:
1. Students will communicate effectively. 2. Students will share thoughts, ideas, and opinions, and support them with details that make understanding easy. 3. Students will become better writers, both in content and mechanics. 4. Students will become better readers, improving comprehension and the ability to read critically. 5. Students will share great books and enter into dialogue about them. 6. Students will use Web 2.0 technology as a tool to publish their work to share with their peers, family, and friends. 7. Students will finish the year of Reading Workshop with a published portfolio of their writing projects.
In addition to the goals for learning, there are other benefits to students. These include:
1. Blogging is fun. 2. Students can improve writing in an exciting and engaging manner. 3. Students can share their work with friends. 4. Students can comment on their friend's work, sharing thoughts and ideas. 5. Students can learn about using computers and web-based tools. 6. Students can show off their work to their parents, grandparents, and other family members. 7. Students can earn good grades for doing something they like.
Students, as you begin blogging on a regular basis, the need to write cleanly is paramount if you want your audience to take you seriously. Readers will not follow someone they don't respect, or someone they see as unintelligent. Even a writer in sixth grade must produce good writing that makes sense, and is not filled with errors. Plus, the content must be interesting and engage the reader. But, that will not happen if the writing has basic errors that distract the reader.
Chris Pirillo discusses the need for PUGS--Punctuation, Usage, Grammar, and Spelling in this video.
Student blogs this year were created and hosted at WordPress. In the past, we used Blogger, but due to the recent changes, (like requiring an access code sent to a cell phone) The Reading Workshop student blogs went to a more user-friendly site. Even though Google owns Blogger, and provides a great service at Google Apps, hosting a blog is not part of the service.
One of the tools provided by WordPress is a spelling and grammar checker. Use of this tool will "clean up" student writing, while helping to teach basic writing skills. Just go to My Account -->Edit Profile-->Proofreading and check the boxes.
Check out the sidebar for a link to all of the student blogs.
Students are creating blogs to post their writing about their thoughts, ideas, opinions, and responses. Using this Web 2.0 tool in the classroom allows students to share their work, comment on each others work, have a real audience, and lets parents view their child's work in Reading Workshop.
For more information about what a blog is, and how it works, check out this video by Lee LeFever of Common Craft.
How does the book you are reading fit in with this list?
1) You enjoy reading the book. You are glad you picked it up. You don't want to quit reading when SSR is over. You want to take the book home and read some more. 2) You have pictures in your head while you are reading. 3) You can hear the characters' voices while you are reading. 4) You can read most of the words on each page. 5) You know what the book is about. 6) It might be a book a friend recommended. 7) It might be a subject you want to learn more about. 8) The book is by your favorite author. 9) The book is part of a series and you can't wait to read the next one. 10) You want to talk to friends about the book and/or do a book share.
Thank you to Carol's Corner, where the idea for this list originated.
1. Choose a book you like, and that you feel is special enough to share.
2. Read the book!
3. Once you finish, ask yourself what made the book meaningful to you
4. Don't give away the ending or any other secrets.
5. Do Not do a retelling.
6. Make it interesting from the start by beginning with a question, sharing a problem, discussing the setting, or a character, or telling a little bit of the plot.
7. Don't ruin the book by telling too much. Grab the readers interest, but leave them wanting more.
8. If you read aloud, it should be short.
9. Prepare and practice, know what you are going to say.
10. Concentrate on the book and your message. Don't worry about the audience.
Each week students have an assignment to read at home. Students choose a book that they want to read from home, the library, or the book room. The only requirement is that they log the date, title, time read, and pages. Students are responsible for filling out this chart each week as they read, logging both at school and at home. Only minutes read outside of class count towards their grade. Occasionally, students will have longer than a week when the school schedule is affected by holidays.
Students can choose to earn the grade they want. The more they read, the higher the score. This is the grade scale:
A = 180 + Minutes B = 120 - 179 Minutes C = 60 - 119 Minutes F = 0-59 Minutes
Although students have no direct assignments associated with Read at Home and the Reading Log, many of the activities and projects in class are based on the book they are reading. The recent project of a Dear Mr. McGuire letter is an example. When students write about their book, it is easy to monitor comprehension and see if students are "getting it." The fact that students can pick their book to read helps because they can find a book that interests them.
The emphasis on reading is largely based on the research from Richard Allington. Allington cites four "background factors" associated with why students have difficulty with reading. According to the author:
1. the amount of reading that students do in and out of school was related to reading achievement; 2. children who spend more time on workbook activities versus reading text are more likely to have difficulty reading; 3. children who come from homes where reading is not modeled have difficulty reading; and, 4. students who have difficulty providing details and arguments to support interpretations of what they read have difficulty with reading.
According to the author, time on task is the best predictor for reading success in students. Put simply, more reading is equal to greater academic achievement.
The best part of this system for monitoring reading, and increasing reading time is how students can control their grades. If they are willing to work hard, their grades will show it.
Having said this though, I was struck by the accomplishment last night of Derek Jeter, when he tied Lou Gehrig's Yankee hit record. What makes it most remarkable is the class he showed and has demonstrated every game of his career.
The most amazing part of breaking the record was the response from fans and his opponent, the Tampa Bay Rays. A standing ovation went on and on, paying tribute to his success.
I started thinking about school and students.
Soooo, riddle me this students, do you root for your peers? Do you pay tribute to the success of others? Do you consider how you can help your classmates achieve success? Even if someone isn't on your "team" can you celebrate when they do well?
Students were given excerpts from the President's speech and asked to respond. Many of the comments were insightful, and showed a real understanding of what it takes to be successful.
Excepts taken from Prepared Remarks of President Barack Obama
Back to School Event
Arlington, Virginia
September 8, 2009
And that’s what I want to focus on today: the responsibility each of you has for your education. I want to start with the responsibility you have to yourself.
Every single one of you has something you’re good at. Every single one of you has something to offer. And you have a responsibility to yourself to discover what that is. That’s the opportunity an education can provide.
That’s why today, I’m calling on each of you to set your own goals for your education – and to do everything you can to meet them. (1)Your goal can be something as simple as doing all your homework, (2) paying attention in class, or (3) spending time each day reading a book. Maybe you’ll decide to get involved in an extracurricular activity, or (4) volunteer in your community. Maybe you’ll (5) decide to stand up for kids who are being teased or bullied because of who they are or how they look, because you believe, like I do, that all kids deserve a safe environment to study and learn.
Whatever you resolve to do, I want you to commit to it. I want you to really work at it. But the truth is, being successful is hard. You won’t love every subject you study. You won’t click with every teacher. Not every homework assignment will seem completely relevant to your life right this minute. And you won’t necessarily succeed at everything the first time you try.
So today, I want to ask you, (7) what’s your contribution going to be? (8) What problems are you going to solve? (9) What discoveries will you make? (10) What will a president who comes here in twenty or fifty or one hundred years say about what all of you did for this country?
Your families, your teachers, and I are doing everything we can to make sure you have the education you need to answer these questions. I’m working hard to fix up your classrooms and get you the books, equipment and computers you need to learn. But you’ve got to do your part too.
So I expect you to get serious this year. I expect you to put your best effort into everything you do. I expect great things from each of you. So don’t let us down – don’t let your family or your country or yourself down. Make us all proud. I know you can do it.
Cierra:
Barack Obama talks about how he wants children to do their best in everything that we do, and I am inspired to do my best finishing assignments and turning everything in.
Hannah H.:
Kids should stand up for other people that are being teased or bullied.
Jacob P.:
I believe that if you work your hardest you can be successful, and to work your hardest you must set goals for yourself. My goal is to give 110% this school year.
Jacob A.:
I think that paying attention in class is important because if you don't pay attention, you will not learn anything, and you will not become successful.
Kasi:
If you work hard, do your best, set goals, and always have a positive attitude you will be successful in life. . . If you get a good education in school, you will be successful when you are an adult.
Shaylee:
When I read this I thought, "we can make a difference, and we can make the World a better place."
Kaylee:
I agree when he said, "spend time each day reading a book." I think this can help you learn more words and help you like to read.
Zach:
I think that if you start something, you should work as hard as you can until you finish.
Justin G:
I think that people should listen to the good things that Barack Obama has to say, even if they don't like him. I agree with him when he says that when the going tets tough, you will have to keep on going. I think you should try your hardest, no matter what.
Garrett:
You have to commit to what it is you are doing. If you don't, you will not succeed. That one word, "commit" means a lot and makes a big difference.
Hannah C.:
The part that really sticks out to me the most is where he said, "Every single one of you has something you're good at. Every single one of you has something to offer. And you have a responsibility to yourself to discover what that is."
Hadley:
I have a goal: Make every day better than the last!
Madison:
If you set a goal, and try to reach that goal, you are pushing yourself to do better. If you set and reach goals, people around you will recognize your progress and be proud of you.
The sun is breaking over the horizon, anticipation builds, at the dawning of a new day. School is starting. New faces walk into the building in new shoes that have been waiting in boxes for the first day of school. Bookbags hang from shoulders as students climb the stairs.
Feeling a little nervous? Don't worry. Don't fret. We will have a good year. Your tennis shoes will leave worn out and dirty, but your mind and your heart will be stronger for having spent the year growing and learning.
Recently students in Reading Workshop wrote about the "good stuff" that they see at our school. Sometimes people forget just how much positive goes on every day at school. The student responses serve as a reminder.
* People find money and put it in the lost and found * People help each other * Mr. McGuire bugs other teachers * When our teachers tell us to get into groups no one is left out * When we work in groups everyone works together * Teachers are almost always happy * Kids help other kids get on track *Kids having good attitudes *People are always smiling * Everyone is respectful to each other * There is a future for my friends and me * We get to sing * It's so much better than city schools where everyone always wants to fight *You can act like yourself without being judged * People work together to get things done * Kids give 100% effort on almost everything * The teachers are really funny * Kids don't make fun of you, if you can't do what they can * Teachers make it fun to learn * No one really cares about looks * People share stuff with other people * When a person drops their stuff people help them pick it up * Kids are happy to come to school * Everyone can make the right choices and be smart *People keep their promises *People get along at recess *Teachers are so kind-hearted *Kids don't just eat with their friends *People compliment each other *A nice principal *People encourage other people *People get along *Students help students * Lots of technology *Great staff, that has a big impact on the school *People respect each others' differences *Friends like me for who I am
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