Friday, May 1, 2015
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Tuesday, April 28, 2015
Monday, April 27, 2015
I Have Trouble With What to Write
I had this conversation about poetry with a student:
Student: I have trouble with what to write.
Me: Really?
Student: Yeah, I don't know what to say.
Me: You like sports a lot, right?
Student: Yeah
Me: How many sports poems have you been working on?
Student: Two
Me: So you have twelve drafts and only two are about sports?
Student: Yeah
Me: But you really like sports?
Student: Yeah, a lot.
Me: Then why don't you write poems about sports?
Student: I don't know.
Me: If that's what you are interested in, that's what you should write about. You know, write about what interests you. Write about what you know.
Student: Oh, OK.
Reading Workshop students, if you are struggling with what to write, maybe you need to give the topic a break and write about something that you find interesting.
Poem written by Shel Silverstein. Image from https://www.pinterest.com/pin/331296116310627083/
Student: I have trouble with what to write.
Me: Really?
Student: Yeah, I don't know what to say.
Me: You like sports a lot, right?
Student: Yeah
Me: How many sports poems have you been working on?
Student: Two
Me: So you have twelve drafts and only two are about sports?
Student: Yeah
Me: But you really like sports?
Student: Yeah, a lot.
Me: Then why don't you write poems about sports?
Student: I don't know.
Me: If that's what you are interested in, that's what you should write about. You know, write about what interests you. Write about what you know.
Student: Oh, OK.
Reading Workshop students, if you are struggling with what to write, maybe you need to give the topic a break and write about something that you find interesting.
Poem written by Shel Silverstein. Image from https://www.pinterest.com/pin/331296116310627083/
Revision
Poems are never finished. Eventually though, we just stop working on them.
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Naomi Shihab Nye said:
If a teacher told me to revise, I thought that meant my writing was a broken-down car that needed to go to the repair shop. I felt insulted. I didn’t realize the teacher was saying, “Make it shine. It’s worth it.” Now I see revision as a beautiful word of hope. It’s a new vision of something. It means you don’t have to be perfect the first time. What a relief!
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Labels:
Free Verse Poems,
Naomi Shihab Nye,
Poetry,
Reading Workshop,
revising,
Writing
Poem For A Grade
The Reading Workshop Poetry Rubric
Component | 4/A | 3/B | 2/ C | 1/D |
Rhythm, Form Structure, Organization | Creatively uses poetic form. A natural rhythm and structure. | Structure and rhythm seem natural to the reader. | Structure and rhythm need revised for better understanding. | Unorganized structure and rhythm. |
Content, Impact | The purpose of the poem is evident leading to a natural conclusion. The poem engages the reader. | Poem is developed with content that engages the reader. | Content is basic with only a hint of the author's intent. | Content is basic and undeveloped. |
Word Selection, Word Usage | Word choice is exact, colorful, and interesting. Uses sensory details to help the reader see, hear, feel, and/or think. | Word choice is interesting with the use of sensory details. | Vocabulary is basic with a few attempts at improving word choice. | Vocabulary is very basic. |
Spelling, Grammar, and Punctuation | No errors and mechanics used as needed to fit with the poetic structure. | Minimal errors in spelling and mechanics used as needed for understanding. | A few errors in spelling and mechanics. | Errors in spelling and mechanics that interfere with reading. |
Effort | Work shows an understanding of poetry and reflects the effort to create a special piece of writing. | Developed piece of work that is the result of revising and editing. | Basic piece of writing that shows a need of improvement. | Undeveloped without signs of editing and revision. |
Created by http://www.thereadingworkshop.com |
Why Kids Should Blog
Ten positive benefits of student blogging:
1. Increased Communication Skills
2. Develop and Improve Writing Skills
3. Interact with Different People
4. Improve Technology Skills
5. Engage in Social Media
6. Understand Online Social Responsibility
7. Explore Hobbies and Special Interests
8. Self Development
9. Learn to Deal with Comments
10.Develop Social Skills for Life
Just click on the picture to see it full size.
Image from www.kidslearntoblog.com
Labels:
Reading Workshop,
Student Blogs,
Writing
Thursday, April 23, 2015
Revising Poetry
Take a piece of advise from Lee Bennet Hopkins in his poem titled, Dear Poet. Take one of your drafts, Reading Workshop students, copy it twice, and write three versions.
Do you want
to write a poem?
Forget it . . .
until
you have
rewritten it.
Make your poem
stronger
by
not
writing a poem
but
rewriting it
and
rewriting it
and
rewriting it
until--
what you
have
is
a poem
like
no
other
poet
has
ever
written--
or
rewritten--
before!
Poem from Seeing the Blue Between compiled by Paul Janeczko.
Labels:
Free Verse Poems,
Poetry,
Reading Workshop,
revising
Wednesday, April 22, 2015
Tuesday, April 21, 2015
Inspired by "You Oughta Meet Danitra Brown"
Reading Workshop students, write an inspired by poem about yourself. Please take note of the pattern of three line stanzas with the first two line rhyming.
You Oughta Meet Danitra Brown
By Nikki Grimes
From the book Meet Danitra BrownYou oughta meet Danitra Brown,
the most splendiferous girl in town.
I oughta know, 'cause she's my friend.
She's not afraid to take a dare,
if something's hard, she doesn't care.
She'll try her best, no matter what.
She doesn't mind what people say.
She always does things her own way.
Her spirit's old, my mom once said.
I only know I like her best
'cause she sticks out from all the rest.
She's only she--Danitra Brown.
You
Oughta Meet Your Teacher
Inspired by You Oughta Meet
Danitra Brown
By
Nikki Grimes
In sixth grade, the
weirdest guy
Never see him
wearing a tie
A casual Mr. McGuire
Even though he is a
teacher
He acts a little
like a preacher
pushing kids to do
what's right
Always cracking a
little joke
Finding ways in
minds to soak
a little learning
Constantly yelling
about hard work
No one dares act
like a jerk
in his classes.
Singing out, a
horrible sound
making students'
brains pound
Another day in
language arts
Need some rhyming help? Check out Rhymezone.
Thursday, April 16, 2015
Wednesday, April 15, 2015
Inspired by "Where I'm From"
In an inspired by poem, writers use the original poem as a guide. Lines, spacing, rhythm, and stanzas usually mimic the model poem. The topic is similar but adapted to fit the writer.
Using George Ella Lyon’s poem as a model, write your own inspired by “Where I’m From” poem. Think about sensory details of sight, sound, smell, taste, and touch in your life. Picture your house and your neighborhood. Consider people that are important to you--parents, grandparents, relatives, friends, and people you admire. Think about things from your life that made you like you are--activities, events, family traditions, and hobbies.
Where I’m From
by George Ella Lyon
I am from clothespins,
from Clorox and carbon tetrachloride.
I am from the dirt under the back porch.
(Black, glistening
it tasted like beets.)
I am from the forsythia bush,
the Dutch elm
whose long gone limbs I remember
as if they were my own.
I’m from fudge and eyeglasses,
from Imogene and Alafair.
I’m from the know-it-alls and the pass-it-ons,
from perk up and pipe down.
I’m from He restoreth my soul with a cottonball lamb
and ten verses I can say myself.
I’m from Artemus and Billie’s Branch,
fried corn and strong coffee.
From the finger my grandfather lost to the auger
the eye my father shut to keep his sight.
Under my bed was a dress box
spilling old pictures,
a sift of lost faces
to drift beneath my dreams.
I am from those moments–
snapped before I budded–
leaf-fall from the family tree
Tuesday, April 14, 2015
Reading Poetry
Poems are built on ideas, experiences or emotions in a condensed form that makes the reader search for understanding. The reader should slow down, think about each line and the words in it, and then reread and reconsider.
However, to understand poetry the reader must not go gently, but should attack. As we begin to spend time in Reading Workshop with poetry/word study, students must overcome their fears and dive into the language of poetry. Whether it be as a reader, analyzing the work of others, or when revising their own work, students must go full speed ahead. They need to take the advise given by Eve Merriam.
However, to understand poetry the reader must not go gently, but should attack. As we begin to spend time in Reading Workshop with poetry/word study, students must overcome their fears and dive into the language of poetry. Whether it be as a reader, analyzing the work of others, or when revising their own work, students must go full speed ahead. They need to take the advise given by Eve Merriam.
How to Eat a Poem
Don't be polite.
Bite in.
Pick it up with your fingers and lick the juice
that may run down your chin.
It is ready and ripe now, whenever you are.
You do not need a knife or fork or spoon
or plate or napkin or tablecloth.
For there is no core
or stem
or rind
or pit
or seed
or skin
to throw away.
What is Merriam's point? What about the poem makes you think that? What thoughts do you have when tearing into her poem? Or others? How does this compare to the way you revise your own poems?
Image from http://www.flickr.com/photos/emdot/10362168/sizes/s/
Labels:
Eve Merriam,
Free Verse Poems,
Poetry,
Reading,
Reading Workshop
Monday, April 13, 2015
Tuesday, April 7, 2015
Let's See, What are Good Poetry Titles?
Weird Students
Mismatched Socks
Riding Vader (My Horse)
I Ate Too Much Chocolate
Cheesy Biscuits and Garlic Breath
Hard Workers
Eli is Not So Shy Any More
Just Plain Megan
Cafeteria Noise
Why Do You Make Me Have to be Mean?
The General aka Mrs. Hardin
Frank the Tank (Kaminsky)
Frank Gets Class
Rainy School Days
Zoom aka Carter
Zoom Thinks He's a Super Hero
The Last Class Was Boring
It Was All My Fault
I was Boring
We Were Still Asleep
Last Night I Had Bad Dreams
Why Does Tacey Work So Hard?
Distracting Class
Off Topic
Writing
World Hunt
I Hate to Lose
My Truck Got Washed Today
I Want to Cry
Not
720 Classes in a Year
My Heart's a Stereo
I Want to Be the Next American Idol
Everybody Now, Slide to the Left
Courage Enough to Write
My Diet Starts Next Monday
Grandma Has Gas
Talk Less, Write More
Afraid of Poetry
Dreams, Desire, Dedication, and Dish Washing
My Chucks Have Blue Shoestrings
Whining Instead of Working
Flo Rider (I Cry)
Music Makes Me Think
Are We Going to Sing Today and Other Questions Students Ask Every Day
Can I Go to the Bathroom?
How Many Topics Should I List?
Is This OK?
Allison Got Her Name on the Sign
Seriously, Aren't you a Little Sick of Cats Because I Am
Alexis, Allison, and Ashton
Earn a Brave Buck
A Little Less Cry and a Lot More Effort
My Sense of Humor is Underappreciated
Nose Pickers
Eddie's Hair
Take a Load Off Fannie
Morning Announcements
It's For not Fur
Red Card
You Can't Have My List
I Wonder What You Don't Know That I Don't Know
A Spot in Time and It's Not a Dalmation
Spaghetti Face
I Hate Sporks
Mismatched Socks
Riding Vader (My Horse)
I Ate Too Much Chocolate
Cheesy Biscuits and Garlic Breath
Hard Workers
Eli is Not So Shy Any More
Just Plain Megan
Cafeteria Noise
Why Do You Make Me Have to be Mean?
The General aka Mrs. Hardin
Frank the Tank (Kaminsky)
Frank Gets Class
Rainy School Days
Zoom aka Carter
Zoom Thinks He's a Super Hero
The Last Class Was Boring
It Was All My Fault
I was Boring
We Were Still Asleep
Last Night I Had Bad Dreams
Why Does Tacey Work So Hard?
Distracting Class
Off Topic
Writing
World Hunt
I Hate to Lose
My Truck Got Washed Today
I Want to Cry
Not
720 Classes in a Year
My Heart's a Stereo
I Want to Be the Next American Idol
Everybody Now, Slide to the Left
Courage Enough to Write
My Diet Starts Next Monday
Grandma Has Gas
Talk Less, Write More
Afraid of Poetry
Dreams, Desire, Dedication, and Dish Washing
My Chucks Have Blue Shoestrings
Whining Instead of Working
Flo Rider (I Cry)
Music Makes Me Think
Are We Going to Sing Today and Other Questions Students Ask Every Day
Can I Go to the Bathroom?
How Many Topics Should I List?
Is This OK?
Allison Got Her Name on the Sign
Seriously, Aren't you a Little Sick of Cats Because I Am
Alexis, Allison, and Ashton
Earn a Brave Buck
A Little Less Cry and a Lot More Effort
My Sense of Humor is Underappreciated
Nose Pickers
Eddie's Hair
Take a Load Off Fannie
Morning Announcements
It's For not Fur
Red Card
You Can't Have My List
I Wonder What You Don't Know That I Don't Know
A Spot in Time and It's Not a Dalmation
Spaghetti Face
I Hate Sporks
Labels:
Free Verse Poems,
Poem Topics,
Reading Workshop,
Writing
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